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The fire in your eyes
When you told me goodbye
The way that you look
As you left me behind.

I felt like you thought
You were finally free
I dont think you love me
But the truth i could not see.

You refused to let me in
Or help me understand
As i pried into your heart
You threw back my hand.

All I wanted was affection
From your beautiful heart
All I got was rejection
And you wished us apart.

I put up no fight
Which is where I went wrong
My head felt light
And that night seem eternally long.
©2003-2009 ~vitz
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A poem that describes my feeling as my special girl leaves me...this happens last year..This is the truth i try to hide...

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:icongemini523:
Yeh , i can totally relate with this. Sometimes i wonder if i put a fight before it ended or some sort of effort, actually tried to do something about it Maybe it couldve turned out different but instead i wear a mask and hold in all my feelings infront of somone im close with.

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:icongemini523:
o yeh and +fav . I enjoy reading a style so close too mine . It's great too know somone understands me for once.

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:icondenea:
well said excellent poem, i am going through the same kind of thing
:iconehlane:
This is your best poem here...woeful yet beautiful...Clap

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"The past is a foreign country, they do things differently there... "

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January 31, 2003

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